When I was approached to review Evie and the Upside-Down World of Nevermore by Birgitte Märgen, I was hesitantly interested. The synopsis had me expecting something akin to Alice’s Adventure’s in Wonderland with a Southern Gothic twist. And to its credit, that isn’t necessarily wrong. It simply fails to live up to either the genre or the well-known book/movie/etc.
The two big positives for me that kept me reading were the short page count and the ease of reading. Not only was this very easy to read through, it was also short enough that I didn’t feel burdened or the need to DNF it. There are crumbs of potential to a greater story, but sadly, we never see more than hints.
Now, the negatives for me also seem to branch off of the positives. The idea was there. It was interesting and I think Märgen has more in mind, a complex background for Evie. Unfortunately, it never makes it to the page. I am unsure if Märgen had a hard limit for page count or if she was afraid of elaborating, but this was incredibly rushed. It read almost like a 200 page synopsis of a longer book. Instead of going into what is happening, the reasons, descriptions, having time exist, everything simply happens as though it were a checklist. Evie has friends. Evie eavesdrop drama. Evie falls. Evie meets a dwarf. Evie gets a stick. Evie goes through meadow. Evie meets other dwarves. None of this gets elaborated on. Even if Evie wouldn’t know what to say or reasons behind anything, the pacing shouldn’t be this abrupt. There should be transitions. There should be introspection or elaborations even if it is Evie just stopping to wonder what is happening or actually observe what is happening. Instead, it is a rush to the end and once we get there, nothing happens or really changes. The ending is just as abrupt as the rest of the novella.
I hate having to give negative reviews, but unfortunately Evie and the Upside-Down World of Nevermore by Birgitte Märgen needs a second pass at workshopping before I can even think about revisiting it to recommend. It is too rushed and too bare bones to enjoy or justify the $10 price tag for the physical copy on Amazon.